Comments : Its Not Fair!!

  • 19 years ago

    by teyateys

    I just read it..and its the thruth it really hurts, we've been through that but maybe someday it will heal, i'll give 5/5 4 that.

  • 19 years ago

    by Joei

    Great poem..... and yea the truth does hurt alot... if i've been hurt twice and i know what your going through but, hey you did a great job.
    Keep it up!

    ** Joei**
    Thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot me :)

  • 19 years ago

    by jessica08

    You know what these poems you write
    mostly describe what im going through
    now.good job gurl
    keep it up
    i like this 1 as well

  • 19 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I can feel the pain.

  • 19 years ago

    by lacy byrum

    Ok, now this one scares me bc this one is like something id write!! like, omg! if u only new how much this described ME! its a lil freaky. i got cold chills when i read this one. i gave it a 5! i wish i could of gave it higher though!

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i loved it cant wait to see read some more of your poems!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *-*InLove:-)*-*

    Great poem. I kno what u are going threw. Ive been there befor. Just wait and give it time... It gets better! 5/5 Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tr!c!a_s@tanicangel

    Hmm i can totally relate to your poem,its sweet,great job.it really does hurt.