No more cries

by Shy   Aug 2, 2005


I'm lost in all this pain.
I thought I was unbreakable,
Because I was truly happy,
but it snuck up on me again,
breaking me again.
my silent tears ,
rain down upon the floor.
I won't let this get me again.
I won't let myself be broken.
I have to fight,
and battle life
so here is my last goodbye.
no more tears.
no more cries.
and just shut the door on life.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lushed

    "no more tears.
    no more cries.
    and just shut the door on life."

    This is really amazing good. the ending honestly have me shivers. and i like how you used repitition with again, because it really made the point that it happened before in a sence of relapse. awsome work!

    5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by crystal

    it could use a little work. it sounds a bit forced. maybe cuz it's not from your point of view? well i still liked it.
    crystal

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    nice job although I think the word again was used a bit too much...other then that...nice job...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

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