nice job although I think the word again was used a bit too much...other then that...nice job...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

it could use a little work. it sounds a bit forced. maybe cuz it's not from your point of view? well i still liked it.
crystal

"no more tears.
no more cries.
and just shut the door on life."

This is really amazing good. the ending honestly have me shivers. and i like how you used repitition with again, because it really made the point that it happened before in a sence of relapse. awsome work!

5/5!