The cheapest way through her heart: you love me dont you

by LovesTragedy   Aug 2, 2005


This vibe you give me its unreal..
its like a scary movie stuck on replay and i don\\\'t have the decency to wake myself up ..

subconsciously thinking of what you\\\'ve done to make my heart stay with this - fake
this failure
this misprint drifting off into the streets of hatred,
waiting for only the happiest to pick it up and proceed the dream of loneliness ..

knowing you have the power to make or break me fills your empty heart with intention...
intention to abide by the simple rules of society? not a chance.
The intention to surrender my last chance to be free -

free of the faded memories fate kept close to my torn heart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was sweet, i know how you feel, like exactly. i think we have a lot in common i like you : ) i love you're vocab too, you're a really good writer the only part i think didn't make sense was this...

    its like a scary movie stuck on replay and i don't have the decency to wake myself up ..

    it just didn't make sense cause like i mean that's cool if watch movies when you're sleeping but most of us dont...lol...it might be better if you said nightmare or a scary dream instead of "scary movie" or instead of "decency to wake myself up" put like decency to turn off the tv i dunno but i think it should be altered a little bit somewhere anyways 5/5 definatly on my favs. great poem

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