For The Longest I've Tried To Get People To Understand These Views In My Poetry...So That They Might Realize That They Should Be Greatful For What They Have And Realize Someone Out There In The World Is Going Through Worst...This Poem Couldn't Have Been Better Said...I Like The Strong Points Behind Every Poem You Write...I Rarely See People Like You Writing Poems With Meaning To Them Anymore...I'm Proud Of You Not Only As My Friend But As a Writer You Have My Respect And My Vote Of "5.0" xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wat Nikki said and that i'm glad that someone can see how wrong it is to be greedy even when their receiving.
Luv Scarlet xxxx

It doesn't flow that well and I think you are going to another line to fast in a way also it seems like some lines are too long and stick out...like the second to last one it doesn't fit with the rest of that stanza.