by Robert Aug 2, 2005
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
An act that gives our children no way out, |
by Pete
This comes across as very against all forms of warfare, personally I am in favour of war for a dedicated reason. |
Very good poem i liked it |
I dont know what to say other then 5/5 hun. Very good flow, the wording was flawless, and the lines were great. Keep it up. |
by Fsams
The scenarios, metaphors and descriptions in this piece are outstanding. I like your wordings and its having the lexical power. Great 5/5 work |
Wow!!...great write!....so true....u penned the message beautifully...the idea was different Yet came out well |