Thats so true and very well put its terrible what measures the world goes to today if only there was peace keep on writing!

take care

very true and a good message behind it! xox

Great poem man, it's really very true good message behind it...man i love all your poems i give 5/5 keep it up

Mahamed

Great written poem and a very valid point raised aswell

Excellent message and excellent write. I didn't find any mistakes and and was glued to the poem since reading the title. The title and concept were unique and very enjoyable. thank you for this refreshing read! 5/5

Wow!!...great write!....so true....u penned the message beautifully...the idea was different Yet came out well

Great job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

The scenarios, metaphors and descriptions in this piece are outstanding. I like your wordings and its having the lexical power. Great 5/5 work

I dont know what to say other then 5/5 hun. Very good flow, the wording was flawless, and the lines were great. Keep it up.
:)

Very good poem i liked it
serious depth
laura

This comes across as very against all forms of warfare, personally I am in favour of war for a dedicated reason.

So for that part I will not comment on the content, but rather the writing style.
You seemt o have a very knowledgable insight into life. Very opinionated in your poetry which will win you alot of plaudits.

The structure is something that bothers me again in this piece. Too much text all at once.

Overall good job.

~Pete.