Heya.. great poem... i likd it. Listen, wehn you have the chance.. could u rate&comment my new poem A wishing Dreamer? I would appreciate it.. Well keep on writing.. and good job!

good poem... but please take my advice and try at least pleeeeez?

it was a great poem. its ritten in the same formatt that u'd write a song in. but guys dont mean anything there just there to make girls feel like shit.so dont hold to many grudges because no matter what u can always do better.
tessa
keep it up