Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Its really clever how youve written a kind of poetic commentry of your thoughts. its perfectly written and i especially love these two lines:

"The words start to fill themselves in
A ghost writer who’s developed a bond"

and also, the use of the word "perfect" when describing hell is really effective, because it is usually portrayed as quite the opposite. excellent poem.

stef/xx