by Lonely Heart .ღ. Aug 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
To figure out the games he plays |
by Katlynn
Amazing job. i really liked this poem alot because no matter what he does to you or whatever. You'll never be able to let him go. That's like me and my boyfriend i love that kid so much and no matter what he does wrong i will always love him and never want to let him go but anyway this is also sad poem. Anyway keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |
by N J Thornton
Very good. I personally think this should be on your featured. I enjoyed this very much. I liked how you repeated "To" and "Would" at the beginning of a line. The ending was great, a strong ending as well. Well done with this one. |
by Samantha
Interesting. Like your style on this one. |
by Kayla
aww i really liked this one....kinda like my second favorite I dont know..lol...5/5 luv yas mwah |
by the middle
once again... i can relate completely... 5/5...again! xoxoxo |