Believe

by Lonely Heart .ღ.   Aug 2, 2005


As i sit here with nothing but my thoughts
alone with stress and distraught
by fear i seem to be caught

would you believe what i have to say
would you listen or
would your thoughts stray

to you i would never tell a lie
if you didn't believe that all I'd have left to do is cry

you know i need you
don't let this mess I've gotten into
make you want us to be though

so many people just want to ruin my life
everyday has so much strife

im sorry if im a let down
im the queen of sorrow,
do i deserve a crown?

i tell you its a lie
as i start to cry

you just wont look in truths way
you made a mistake today

i aways tell you the truth
why would i lie now?

please believe me
the truth you have to see

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    It seems to end a bit prematurely, I think it could be expanded on a bit more. I like how you could change the rhythm and stanza length and still keep the flow of this going. I think the first stanza is the best, it sounds very poetic and the rhyming fits very nicely.

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    I like the rhyme. Good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    good job...i didnt like this one as much as the other one because the flow was a bit rough here but other then that good job....luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    the flow kinda put me off a bit but it was a good poem...

    better luck next time :)

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