by Lonely Heart .ღ. Aug 2, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
As i sit here with nothing but my thoughts |
by Ariana
It seems to end a bit prematurely, I think it could be expanded on a bit more. I like how you could change the rhythm and stanza length and still keep the flow of this going. I think the first stanza is the best, it sounds very poetic and the rhyming fits very nicely. |
by Samantha
I like the rhyme. Good work. |
by Kayla
good job...i didnt like this one as much as the other one because the flow was a bit rough here but other then that good job....luv yas mwah |
by ASPHYXIATED
the flow kinda put me off a bit but it was a good poem... |