that was really good i loved it keep up the gr8 work

love andrea xxxx

ohh so good!
i love it ....

Love yaz Sam xxx

This poem makes ya think, I like that :D

Me personally don't make discessions(sp?) my friend Paul does them for me lol.

It had good flow and was a cool idea ^.^

It also was cool the way it showed the oppisite if each discession(sp? again)

good write :D

this was absoultely wonderful, one of the best poems I have ever read.
it was so true and you wrote it beautifully. keep it up.
take care,
marjan