by fallen angel Aug 2, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I listened to our song, the words seemed empty. I finally realized Id moved on. Your voice, your touch, nothing seemed to matter to me. My heart was fixed, I loved again. You tried to come back into my life, I shut the door and faced my love. He was all I wanted, needed and desired. You could never enter my heart again, it was already taken and would be for eternity. You lost your chance and broke my heart, I say thank you as now I have found the greatest love of all. |
by Britney
Wow great job! i hope you gave him this poem! I feel the exact same way about this guy Jon lol.. so its kind of ironic. Jon wants back in my heart but i love my boyfriend.. too much :-D. Anyways lol great job! i absolutely loved it! 6/5 lol. |
by Mandy Lou
Okay, I think this is really sweet and people who don't rate it as a 5 are GAY! (Unless we're friends of course...tehehe) I think you could make this into a really cute poem if you tried! Great job though! |
by amelia
its nice vikki.... i've been wanting to comment on this for soooooooo long : ) keep writing more of em !! |
by Kelsey
that was very romantic. |
by Brazon
hey i liked this poem its very meaningful keep up the gud work. xxx |