by fallen angel Aug 2, 2005
category :
Special events /
mothers day
You are my best friend, we share all our secrets. You know my life as well as a diary would. You hug me when times are bad, every time I scape my knee. I hope you never leave mum, its always you and me. Your my mum and best friend all wrapped in one. Please never leave me, i don't know what id do. Who would tuck me in at night and say I love you before turning out the light. No one could ever replace you mum, so never leave my side. |
by Lulu
Besides the whole poem being in paragraph form it was great! 5/5 Keep up the good writing you have great potential to be amazing. |
by ASPHYXIATED
this has great meaning and is very sweet..but the flow could be worked on :) |
by Britney
Awwl.. very sweet! I loved it. My mom is my best friend also! But anyways great job. 5/5 |
by Mandy Lou
I think this is really cute, I just don't know why it's in the "special occasions" part...5/5 though! |
by Hans Fausto
wow..how thoughtful of you to write about your mom...really nice...you have alot of potential..keep it up! |