this was a very sweet poem, u should try breaking up the lines when you type so it isnt one big paragraph, it reads smoother that way! but you are still a very good up and coming poet

as usual another greaat poem :D
short to the point :D

Jacs
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wow..how thoughtful of you to write about your mom...really nice...you have alot of potential..keep it up!

I think this is really cute, I just don't know why it's in the "special occasions" part...5/5 though!

Awwl.. very sweet! I loved it. My mom is my best friend also! But anyways great job. 5/5

this has great meaning and is very sweet..but the flow could be worked on :)

good write :)

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Besides the whole poem being in paragraph form it was great! 5/5 Keep up the good writing you have great potential to be amazing.
Lulu