by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! .. Aug 2, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
The Days of a Child were so stress free. |
by Bridgette
This poem holds so much truth that many young people need to learn to see. You did a great job on this and I'm sure that many people can relate to it at least to some degree. I loved it! 5/5 Keep it up! |
Some flow problems but this had been quite well done. Some words were a little iffy but really enjoyed this. This was really...wow....Don't know how to describe it except that it was really something that I was really impressed by. |
This one is very interesting. I wasn't sure what you meant with the last line "Are still knocking at my door" but maybe I should read it over again. |
This Poem Is To Dam Good To Be a 4 Nigga! I Gave U a 5.0 :) Luv u BrOtha *smOoChez* -Nikk♥ |
by Christa
I really liked this poem. You seem to be a deep thinker, and thats a great quality, especially in writing. |