Incomplet

by XxTeArSxX17   Aug 2, 2005


INCOMPLETE

I love you with all my heart and soul,
But I'm really afraid,
Because I love you so much,
And your love for me is fading away

I love you so much,
With all my soul and my heart,
but you fell in love with someone else,
And that made your feelings for me depart

I love you so much,
But I'm very afraid,
Because now I fell like you don’t need me,
When I thought you could not live with out me,

I wish to the stars,
That some how you see,
That you mean absolutely everything to me,

But now I have to live with this fear,
The one I never wanted to be true,
The one of some day losing you,

Now your gone and that fears came to be,
And now my life is nothing but incomplete.

BY: Marielys and Ashleigh~

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  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I loved it so much it was great keep up the good work i loved all of the stanzas its all about expressing your feelings!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This was alright .. 4/5 i did like the second stanza too much not sure why...i can deffinatly see you'v improved a lot over time

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job.. srry about the loss

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