Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job.. srry about the loss

This was alright .. 4/5 i did like the second stanza too much not sure why...i can deffinatly see you'v improved a lot over time

I loved it so much it was great keep up the good work i loved all of the stanzas its all about expressing your feelings!!!!!!!!!!