awww hun, im so sorry. beautiful poem!!! you're so talented. keep up the amazing work!
-xXx-

Lovely! I love it! Very very long though, yet it didn't seem forced. good job.

OMG i was captivated!!! this poem is so amazing, I read zacs poem then yours and omg... I LOVE THIS POEM... i know the content is extrememly powerful and has much more meaning then just words.. but from a writeres point of view it was amazing.. from a friends point of view, well i dont know, cuz i havent herad the whole story:S
anyways these are the 2 lines i liked best!

I can't keep on like this
Hurting myself for you
Shakespeare wasn't kidding:
"To thine ownself be true."

I'll keep on caring
You have a place in my heart
But to fix me it has to be broken
So I tear us apart

very deep car.

sweetie... dont feel guilty. give yourself a chance to heal some and i know he will do the same. it will work out. i know it will. i love ya so much and i miss talking to you. im always here for ya sweetie!!!
~cort

Very emotional and touching. You don't have anything to feel guilty about, you've done all you can. Now you need to take time for you and only you, chin up, stay strong, give yourself time to heal. Beautifully done.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

carlee-arlee! That was a beautiful poem! i loved it 5/5 keep writing...and always remember. You are always you...no matter who you are...and you carlee are a wonderful, insperational person who can do many wonderful things! Keep on pusin through carlee!
Much Love
Chelsea

that was a great poem i;m gunna add u to my favorites ur a great poet

keep writin and always rite form th heart,
$he//-y

Simply Beautiful.

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Excellent..I feel like I stepped in your shoes before..for I did. Best of luck.