Tears of the Sky

Wow... You've had it really rough in the love department, haven't you..? But you write some of the best poems when you've been hurt. That's the only thing that sucks about poetry - you have to want to kill someone or kill yourself to write really good, emotional poems. (Or at least it's that way for me) Nice.

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"With my hands over my head"
This is exactly what I did when I read this poem lol, its great! your inproving as a writer so fricken much, BUT once again I asked you for a poem that needs help, and man this dosn't its great!
your on my freaken favs lol :D

Im gonna ask you one more time lol :D

great write, flow rocked and it was a deep poem.

"With my hands over my head"
This is exactly what I did when I read this poem lol, its great! your inproving as a writer so fricken much, BUT once again I asked you for a poem that needs help, and man this dosn't its great!
your on my freaken favs lol :D

Im gonna ask you one more time lol :D

great write, flow rocked and it was a deep poem.

so lovely ! was a pleasure reading it !

Awwl.. very sad. But heartbreaks are never happy. Keep your head up! Anyways great poem I loved the rhyme scheme it all went together nicely.