An Endless Tear

by ---AL---   Aug 3, 2005


An Endless Tear

Dropping Down my cheek,
Descends this stinging tear,
To let you know I’m weak.
To let you know I fear,

To think I thought I knew,
But thinking was not real,
Then you split yourself in two,
And Forgot the way I feel,

I once called you my friend,
But now it seems I’m lost,
But still I do pretend,
That I am not the tossed,

But it hurts to feel I am,
To know I can’t erase,
To know I feel it damn
Our bond which turned to waste.

It happened so quickly,
And I fear it to repeat,
But I can’t let this be
Our ultimate defeat.

Now I live in memory,
Of the good times we had,
Hating how it came to be,
That I fear to call you dad,

And even now I try,
To force myself to bare,
Instead of asking why,
It seems you didn’t care,

But still I do believe,
That maybe just someday,
The pain shall want to leave,
And a call will come my way

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  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Hm, at first I did not think that this could possibly be about your dad, but you did indeed state that it was in your poem. The rhyme scheme was a nice little
    A
    B
    A
    B
    It had a good flow, but it was lacking imagery, I expected to see something in my head, but it wasn't as descriptive as I hoped. But you made up for it in other sections, such as the format. Good choice of rhyming, it's not *too* forced.

    Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Savanha

    I know you have a lot, but i really think that this is one of your best work... 10/5 for real.

    ILY
    Savanha

  • 18 years ago

    by ShatteredAngel

    Another great poem.. You're a really talented writer.. Take care.. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    I loved your poem I gave it a 5. I know how it is to lose tuch witha father. But I think its good that you can write and let a little of your pain out. If you can it would nice if you can check out my poems and tell me what you think.....I can't wait to read more of your poems.

  • 19 years ago

    by kate

    Omg its sad but very good you have a gd talnet ur mae them so easy to read and make so so much sense wel done Kate

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