wow, very touching poem =)... sorry about your dad, sad loosing contact your your father... nut stay strong and keep writing ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Your a rele good writer, i know this poem well! it is almost how i feel with my friend Lex we just kind of grew apart but we r both wanting to stay friends so neither of us can let go even tho there is nothing to hold, i no complicated! nice work 5/5
*~~Kat~~*

i loved it, very sad. but i know how u feel because i havent seen my dad or herd from him since i was six. very sad also. ur a good writer, so keep up the good work. and u should check out some of my poems. broken heart is a good one. and if its okay could i add u too my favourites?
...TESSA~*~~~

This is very sad and emotional, I just love it!!!! very touching and heartbreaking....keep up the good work...

*Hugs Sabrina*

welcome to the club

This is a great poem! I'm sorry about how things are with your dad. I don't see my dad either but that's only because he's in jail for beating me... so I don't really want to see him anyways. I hope things work out for you! Great job 5/5

~ Tina

Nice work i liked it.I could tell and see the true feeling i the poem .Keep the great work up

hey,
good poem, very touching. again, i love the way u write, its interesting, like talking to u, but much more sincere and personal on a diff level.
i hope ur creativity never dies.
luv u and ur writting
xoxo*rachel*xoxo

That was really great! I'm really sorry about your dad, though, if this is true. I hope you're okay. It had a really great flow and great rhyme. Awesome job!

.:*-*Krissy*-*:.

Hey I really like this poem.....Me personally, I have never met my biological father, and I choose not to call my stepdad, dad...I call him by his first name. I can easily relate to this poem. Keep up the good work!

~*Amber*~

Omg its sad but very good you have a gd talnet ur mae them so easy to read and make so so much sense wel done Kate

I loved your poem I gave it a 5. I know how it is to lose tuch witha father. But I think its good that you can write and let a little of your pain out. If you can it would nice if you can check out my poems and tell me what you think.....I can't wait to read more of your poems.

Another great poem.. You're a really talented writer.. Take care.. xxx

I know you have a lot, but i really think that this is one of your best work... 10/5 for real.

ILY
Savanha

Hm, at first I did not think that this could possibly be about your dad, but you did indeed state that it was in your poem. The rhyme scheme was a nice little
A
B
A
B
It had a good flow, but it was lacking imagery, I expected to see something in my head, but it wasn't as descriptive as I hoped. But you made up for it in other sections, such as the format. Good choice of rhyming, it's not *too* forced.

Keep up the good work.