its very touching brit.... its sad.... and sweet... i liked it....

I love the way you wrote this poem. It reminds me of a day dream I had actually.....sorta weird. You did a great job writing this, I love your work.

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Hey, i really liked this, it's beautifuly written and there is sooooo much emotion in it. I hope you're holding out okay, cos i know how hard it is when someone you're close to dies.
Good Job !!
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