interesting...

wow depressing

hey i liked this poem very sad though xxx

i liked the flow in this poem...as everyone said it is sad but its deep also.

well done :)

That poem was outstanding, It had me from the start to the finish. Great job and i hope to read more soon so keep writing you have alot of talent.

Powerful piece you're one talented writer! The flow was absolutely perfect as well as your choice of words. This could almost go under depressing poems. Well done! Brooke~

Soo deep! I can totally relate it!!!
keep it up!!!
another 5/5

Kick ass nice structure

A very good poem.. i like the way its written. good job. *5/5*

Very nice poem...IT had good flow through the whole thing.I like it a lot.Your a very good writter..Keep up the good work

Outstanding work, this poem was extremely well done. It had a great rhyme scheme and flow.