by Lori Aug 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
When life has you down to the point of a frown,and no one is helping you look around,for things to do and places to go,your brain activity is getting slow.You lay down and fall asleep,dog resting at your feet.You take a breath and try to breathe to fall down on your knees.To cry and watch the sun leave,behind the hills, too many pills.Your going toward the white light,take a breath and don't be scared of fright,life is gone,it is night. |
by Lori
Thanks for the comments guys |
by Torn
hey i realyl like this poem. got a lot of emotion. thankyou so much for commenting on my poem, it means so much...yet i just wish what you said was true, that someone did care etc... |
by XxTeArSxX17
nice job love it keep iy up 5/5 thanks for your comment it means a lot to me |
by Lori
thanks for the comments |