Death

by Lori   Aug 3, 2005


When life has you down to the point of a frown,and no one is helping you look around,for things to do and places to go,your brain activity is getting slow.You lay down and fall asleep,dog resting at your feet.You take a breath and try to breathe to fall down on your knees.To cry and watch the sun leave,behind the hills, too many pills.Your going toward the white light,take a breath and don't be scared of fright,life is gone,it is night.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lori

    Thanks for the comments guys

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    hey i realyl like this poem. got a lot of emotion. thankyou so much for commenting on my poem, it means so much...yet i just wish what you said was true, that someone did care etc...
    anyway take care x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    nice job love it keep iy up 5/5 thanks for your comment it means a lot to me

  • 19 years ago

    by Lori

    thanks for the comments

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