Shattered soul

by silence kills   Aug 3, 2005


Loosing faith
dying hope
feeling unsafe
no one knows
colorless eyes
pale sad face
alone she cries
she’s lost all grace
broken dreams
left unfulfilled
she cries out
but no one hears
shattered soul
desperate heart
no one cares
so nothing starts
all this pain
held inside
she’s falling faster
you walk by
silent tears
meaningless words
now she knows
she can’t be lured
weakened thoughts
grasping mind
searching for answers
she never finds
unwanted past
broken life
darkening fast
a silver knife
closing eyes
undesirable fate
now you see
but it’s too late

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  • 16 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    Common mistake...realiizing the problem too late...this is a good write please continue posting.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxPainfulDeathxX

    Another great from you!!! i really like the short line poems it gives it a fast pace but you still take everything in...all the emotion behind the words. love your work eager to read more!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Firstly thanks for your comment on my poem

    this poem is really well done sweet short n 2the point well done!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    omg-i so connect with that. i swear it could almost be written for me. it is so great! no lie. keep up the good work. holla at me when you have a new one.5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Suicidal_Angel

    loved it, ! i can totally relate.

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