Autumns Advice

by Lenny   Aug 3, 2005


Flaming trees of golds and reds
Align the skies once more,
Trodden leaves of browns and greys
Swathe the forest floor,
The old and wise view from afar,
While youth enquire near,
The able season autumn
Brings a message to beware,
For when dear autumn packs his bags
And journeys as is norm,
Vile winter shall come spiteful
And riding on a storm,
His eyes are cold and lonely,
But do not be deceived,
For his sadness turned to anger
And that anger turned to greed,
His frosty fingers swipe,
Claiming all the world has made,
As he tosses sheets of white,
With his unforgiving spade,
But do not fret or worry,
For his patience will expire,
And then his sister spring,
Shall come with her orb of fire,
To melt away his frosty spite,
And replace his angers toil,
With a blissful trail of blossoms,
To mend the thawing soil,
And with these final words,
Dear autumn makes his way,
And Winter to the west,
Creates a dawn of hurtful grey.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    A great piece......
    5/5 for this no bet.

    i had a good read...... =)

    u are painting autum with words amazing..
    pls keep writing.=)

    read more of ur poem soon...

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    This is an amzing poem, i really liked it, my only suggestion and sorry if you don't like it is to change the title from Autumns Advice, to Autumns Grace! and yes i know it doen't fit but ya know! it is only a suggestion!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow. that was amazing! the imagery was stunning and literally took my breath away! i loved how you gave the seasons characteristics, it really added affect..

    Vile winter shall come spiteful
    ^ i think that it should be "spitefully" but maybe i am wrong.. just checking.

    excellent poem! definetely deserves more than a 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Melissa

    I love nature poems and this one is amazing! Very well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by brown eyes and a melancholy smile

    This is wonderful. (this is going to sound lame, but for lack of a better word...) it's magical. brilliant write, very well done.

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