sweet poem. ur dad'll love it. i think the part of the reason i thought it was good poem is cuz i felt like it came from ur heart. keep it up.
-Cassya

I lik ur poem coz it reminded me of my dad except my dad is here evry night but he just doesnt lik hes here he just sits in his chair with out a work n a mean look on his face

Thts so nice i really like tht poem!!!