very interesting and diffrent but I like it and its understandable ;)

good jobz

-Josiah

This is differnt from your oother work, but I like it.

Warm regards,

Steve

I'm starting to like these. :D Very creative, and they seem to always bring out interesting lines. - beautifully done. :)

Just to tell yah, i'm off to Australia tonight so i won't be on for a few weeks. I'll miss you and i'll miss reading your work. So take care hun.

Love always and forever.
<333
-Kals.

i love these poems!!
love alwayz
angie

wisdom beyond your years my dear. very beautiful and i'm glad you seem to want to branch out to other aspects in poetry. very nice.
-A

Good job! I checked out some of your work. I can't believe that you're only 13 years old. What remarkable talent you have!

Keep up the good work!
JJ

(PS. what's it like there in Georgia? I have a whole bunch of family somewhere over there but sadly I've never even been to the place. *wonders*)

i like this one, it may have been one of your practice ones but i think i like this one better then your other ones with your new styles. beautiful job and it's nice seeing your branch out and trying new things.

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love and you know the rest~