by JeBeGood Aug 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm walking down an empty street |
by fallen angel
an amazing poem. it was filled with thought. keep writing, i love the style. xx |
by Christa
I got your request that you wanted people to read your new poems with your new style that you are trying. Well, your poem was good. You just need to make sure it is not too wordy. For example "The horizon is fading and the silence still defeaning |