That's so sad it brings back memories of my grandpas death. I loved the way you ended this. Very heartfelt poem! Brooke~

awsome write I think everyone can relate to that

oh its sooo very very very very very very very sad and good 5/5 keep it up!

My nan was my best friend for parts of my life..

I still cry when I think about her..

I really loved this poem for I could relate to it!

well done!

x)

i didnt like this one a well as the other one....some of the rhymes seemed forced....4/5 nice job though...luv yas mwah

-kayla-