Lots of feeling in this. I have always said to "Go With Your Heart" Your head thinks and your heart feels.

All of my work is about Angela. Who I lost and she has now returned to be mine forever.

I liked your poem alot.

very good poem. You could make it a little longer without making it too wordy and it will still pack the same meaning, but it is still very good!

Always sucks when you miss out on perfect opportunity's! This poem reflected on that issue well! great piece, kind regards from Kane

I enjoyed the poem:) And thanks for your comments on 2 of mine:)

hey, your poem is pretty good okay, pretty fine and true. i know how ya feel. this person must be pretty important. yeah i know this is comin from a guy, but who cares. just like age doesn't matter when you are 'truly' in love. yeah fifty years is stretching, bt you know what i mean. lol. if ya wanna talk sonetime, aim-yohhaoa, y!-lavateen14, msn-supershadownw1@hotmail.com, icq-219231535. later

:) loved it!

Jacs
xxx

aww what a sad poem but so true...ive had that happen to.... well anyways good job...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

I really like the poem other than the little bit that says "I'm back now" I know it's important but it just doesn't seem to fit in.

This is really really sweet. I think that you could make it a little better though. You have the rhyming pattern down, I just think that you could enrich the text a little, make it longer or something...