Me

by Amanda   Aug 4, 2005


I used to feel so lonely and sometimes I still do,
sitting all alone, wishing to be like you,
Getting up in a morning, frown upon my face,
looking in the mirror, I’m so out of place,

My hair is in a mess and my top body is so flat,
people only treat me like the old door mat,
Go and have a cry, get out the bottle of gin,
maybe a bottle of whisky just to do me in,

I cannot feel like this, have to push it away,
got to think of others and how they feel today,
I am going to smile and try to be alright,
Try to cope and start afresh tonight,

This poem makes no sense but it means alot to me,
When I look at myself this is what I see,
A lonely, sad, depressed girl, who just needs some love,
Doesn't want to be the girl written about above!

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Stay positive girl you're a great person! I wish the red number were working I never even knew you were back writing. I have really missed reading your poems. Your work is filled with passion and true feelings which makes it wonderful! Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Chad

    Excellent...5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by JJ

    Don't degrade yourself and think happy thoughts...

  • 19 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow that was a very nice poem.. I really Liked it. And i'm sure one day there will be a person who treats you way better than a door mat! atleast I know i will.. If you ever need anything I have aim my s/n is x0xSweet Sinzx0x. But great job 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    WoW Amanda one of your best poems ever, cause this makes so much sense to me too, I feel exactly like this every day!!! I'm so sad now, cause I don't wnat you to be depressed, hey that's my job to be =0) Please smile for me, tomorrow is a better day I promise....Great poem, so full of feelings and emotions, very touching!!!

    *Love you*

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