by clickityclack Aug 4, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
This is dedicated 2 the love of my life Landon!!! |
by Patrik
Same thing as the other one, nice poem but syllables where way out of line which makes it (I think) not as good as it could be. But even though that you've written a very touching poem that I, and probably many others can relate too. As long as you have strong feelings in your poems they'll be quite good:) |
by fallen angel
i really liked this poem, the emotion in it was fantastic. i hope he knows how special he is to you. hope you have a happy relationship, keep writing xxx |