i really liked this poem, the emotion in it was fantastic. i hope he knows how special he is to you. hope you have a happy relationship, keep writing xxx

Same thing as the other one, nice poem but syllables where way out of line which makes it (I think) not as good as it could be. But even though that you've written a very touching poem that I, and probably many others can relate too. As long as you have strong feelings in your poems they'll be quite good:)

Best wishes,
Patrik