Drowning Dream

by Fallen Angel   Aug 4, 2005


He Drowns....

Drowning in his bloody Lake

of lost hope, dreams, Sanity....

No one can save him

from his own self harming.....

Destined, Fatal lived dream

He Dreams.....

dreaming in his forsaken death bed.

looking upon what's yet to come....

Can anyone save him, save him from his own self theory.

Will anyone ever be able to understand, see what's inside, the thoughts, his feelings.

No, they can't, he can only save himself, save him from water filled lungs his mind....

Swim too the top of all of his torturing thoughts and his condemned life.... Sinking too the bottom, his mind loosing control.... Power lost....

He can save himself, if he chooses to find the light hidden deep inside his eyes.....

Save himself

from his condemned

mind

&

dreams

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hey I loved this!!! It's very deep and sad, but still a WONDERFUL poem!!! Keep it up!!!
    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey angel! I actually really liked it... not the saddness of it lol... but the way it flowed and stuff... I thougt that maybe u could make it rhyme a bit more... but it's unique and thats great... wat I really like about it! keep it up darls... cya on msn!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    Sad-true-deep-liked it