nice poem, i like the style in this one. It was verry well written as well! kind regards from Kane

Very refreshing and uplifting... Maybe you do need to spend some quality time with your parent(s), I don't mean to spell out orders but sometimes you'll need the feeling of being loved by your parents. (that sparkling feeling... oh how I miss you so.) Great poem. Your eye looks very bueatiful by the way. ^_^x

very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though. great job with everything.

wonderful poem, so full of emotion- as usual, i can't find any flaws! keep it up!

I can't tell you enough that you're such a great writer.