wow...amazing!!!! wow... very strong message. thank you for all your comments, they really mean a lot. you're so talented. keep it up!
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With these poisoned eyes
See society, so full of lies
The future foretold
Will be the end of us all

it's amazing words like a sword, so powerful message, i liked how you ended the poem, nicely done!

have a good day to you sir! peace. bert.~