good job! *hugs* thnx 4 comments! the only line i didnt lyke wuz: As life may not be as we expect ...i dunno it just doesnt fit...but keep it up! XXXXX
JL

thank you, i can only improve! thanks u for ur comment

This is a lot like how I see life...and although I write about it, I never seem to quite get it all out...so this has helped there too...great poem...Adz

this is pretty good