wow your very talented, great poem~whittney

Wow, that poem is so realistic. It has so much depth and soul, it makes it worthwhile to read. I would rate it a ten if i could, but 5 is good for now.

-Jennifer.

WOW!it was good but sad if you know what I mean.That was just very well wrote.

wow i love that, you are amazing at writing poems.... 5/5 absolutely

Hello. I don't know if you remember me but I was in the chat with you so I thought I'd come and see your poems since you seemed nice.

This poem is very nice. I really like it and it was very well written. My favourite bit was: "I said to him in reply,
"that is not the thing for I,
can you make her happy sir,
can you make us what we were,
can you bring her the greatest love,
given from someone who is above,
all of what I could ever do,
someone less like me and more like you?","

I really liked this poem and I gave it a five.

I hope to hear from you soon maybe. Take care, Elle xxx

Wow, that was amazing. It was really deep. I liked it. Keep up the good work and take care.

This pome has a mind of its own its so beautiful i could not stop reading it

Oh My gosh thats great keep it up u got great talent!

Hahahahahaahah. I loved it and agree with ure concept may u always be a happy man

Wow.. your Poems Work Realy Well Together.. The Flow Is Perfect.. You Have Good Tallent.. Keep It Up!

Wow tht is really good
5/5
keep it up
i like how u ryme i dont at all
ur words r totally flowing
and i so can relate to that
keep it up
-nikki

Great analogy...i love this the dialogue is godo adn everything rly flowed..excellent.

lissa

What a wonderful poem! So sad! You have a talent for writing! Makes me want to read more of your work.