Jess! awesome poem i love it, i read it last weekend when u showed it to me but, not a good last line. definatly a horrible last line.. change it to the line i gave you bc the one u have has nothing to do with the poem u have written here (its about guys) u wrote a line about like suicide or depression, and it rhymes with the wrong line... it has to rhyme with "shit" not "life" ok love you call me!