Comments : Cheated on twice!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I never thought of it that way! You and your metaphors! Hehe, it was great Kane, good job! Amanda xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I wish I could write metaphorically like you...good work...

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Hey, awesome poem yet again. This is a new one i suppose;) I love the words you used, perfect for the context of the poem. Brilliant metaphors as always. If you get time, could u check out some of my new ones too?

    Ana*

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    Hey,
    great poem. its really meaningful 2. and all and great metaphors and plz comment on another one of mine thanks
    kristen