Reason to live

by BlueDreams   Aug 4, 2005


There is a reason to live
beyond the things we can do
it's not about our goals
it's not about our accomplishments
it's beyond what we can comprehend
the greatest sacrifice he made for us
much more than we can do from him
the least we can do is live for him
so he can do things through us
that are much greater
than the things we can do by ourselves
there is no better reason to live.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Good job on this poem, its short but gets a clear confident message across...well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    So true blue...so true of me and you...

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Great piece of work,

    Life is not just to stop and lose hope facing a mishap or tragedy. There are 1000s of reasons to live. Your poem reflects the basic principles of these reasons and the root of it. Very well written with the appropriate choice of words and flow.

    Both lexically and poetically it is great. Tc

  • 17 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Words of Wisdom. Very well written
    Peace and Blessings

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Great :) 5/5

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