nice poem, shows that we do indeed have a reason to live. could u comment on my poems? i would be so greatfull

well done
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Wonderful message to send out. We could never even come close to repaying Him for all he gave & all he endured for us. The least we can do is live our lives for Him.
Awesome write my friend.

Take care & God bless

Very powerful write my dear friend.... nice to see you posting again. Thanks for all your lovely comments, bless your beautiful heart......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Ooooh, I loved this. Very short and yet full of tons of meaning. Great work, 5/5
Car

Powerful my friend, glad to see you back posting again. Thanks for your beautiful heart and a pleasure to read your beautiful words. hugs, love, Ann

awsome write! 5/5

Aww hey bert! i didn't know you posted a poem on here, i may be a little overdue on my comment, but better late than never! thank you for the comment on my poem...i will go back into your blog and comment on those, as soon as i can open my email to get the link again. Yesterday while i was trying to comment on one after i commented on the first, it would not let me, but anywya, i'm babbling. Excellent job, you're right! It is a reason to live, as well as many more. Excellent work, keep writing, even though I know you will!
love ya, take care~
-Brittany

Very Nice Bert, very well done. :)
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

p/s

u always write great poems ;-)

This is a great poem and yeah it is a really good reason to live.you did a great job keep it up!5/5

A very meaningful poem indeed , conveys a strong message .
beautifully writen.

Reagards
--chavii--

Amazing write. Short but straight to the point. Good Job.

~Joe~

Hi Bert
This is a great write full of inspiration, hope and understanding...I know that you got the truth in my last poem...ty for your comment

Beautiful poem - thanks for showing that there really is a lot out there to live for, and so often we're ungrateful for everything jesus christ has done for us. remember to write it, but more importantly, remember to live it. excellent work, my friend.
-annie

Ver very very true! nice poem!

Bert
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The soldiers were drafted and had no choice, But this did not worry the protesters, or change the tone of their voice, They had to fight..... When the soldiers had been withdrawn, On arrival home they were met with hate and scorn, The crowd said it is you we have grown to detest, So the soldier could not walk with pride with medals on his chest, It was not the soldier that should despise, The bureaucrats of the day, Are the ones that should pay, Even though it is late and overdue.here must allways be a reason to live even when you cant see why

A wonderful poem awe inspiring
5/5
John
Thanks for comments on mine
you should submit this

Great message in this one I enjoyed this read...even though I usually don't enjoy reading poems without some sort of rhyming involved

Completely lovely, wonderful job!

If this poem is about God, which I think it is I would like to say that I'm not religious but this poem touched me. Very true also. Not just for him though. Many people have what they live for. Yours is greatly expressed here.

Wonderful poem. So inspirational and full of hope. Flawless and perfectly written, definately a masterpiece.

I am guessing that this is about jesus? if i am wrong i am sorry! but yeah he sacrificed him-self, to be pure you must suffer, let people attack you not your neighbour! Embrace pain!