Wow awsome poem..
sort but you got alot of felling into it..
and it was just great..
good job 5/5

Wow! you've left me speechless!
That is such a beautiful poem! wow!

Amazing work, your tallent really shines through in this poem!

5/5 Steph

Wow very good poem. its really inspirational. had a great flow to it. wonderful write. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Sometimes one needs a reason to live.

Great message (very true) and well expressed. 5/5.

Good poem if u think i am write good poems u should check out theking he writes good poems by the way this is a good poem 100/100

This is another beautiful poem with a very powerful message. You have just opened up another window in my mind when I read this. very inspiring. I only have one suggestion in this line that you wrote:

much more than we can do from him

I think that you should change from to for. that is all. again you leave me with not many words to say. 5/5

Love
Letty

Great :) 5/5

Words of Wisdom. Very well written
Peace and Blessings

Great piece of work,

Life is not just to stop and lose hope facing a mishap or tragedy. There are 1000s of reasons to live. Your poem reflects the basic principles of these reasons and the root of it. Very well written with the appropriate choice of words and flow.

Both lexically and poetically it is great. Tc

So true blue...so true of me and you...

Good job on this poem, its short but gets a clear confident message across...well done