awwww lovely poem it is sooo sweet and heart felt!!!!!!
keep up the good work!!!
luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

great poem! i really enjoyed reading it and soaked up the emotion flowing from your words!

Mike

I feel the same charm all around when i read your poems, Preciosa. Kinda makes me comfortable. But this one makes me kind of sad, too. :( Lost love, broken heart...but anyways...the flow is a little choppy, like in the first stanza. But you don't have to change it, it's fine the way it is. :)

Remember to keep confidence too. ;)

Peaces. //Ari\\

great poem! I'm a little confused about the rhyme scheme but still great meaning to this poem, I enjoyed it!

Very nice. It was very full of love.

You can tell you are getting better with your poems. Good Job

Great poem i love the way it was written god i hate when the 1st love leaves you dats how i felt but now i found my one true love

I really liked the end to this poem...it really changes the mood of the reading. Good poem.

I really liked the end to this poem...it really changes the mood of the reading. Good poem.

It was a great poem and i can relate to it! I understood how you felt really well. keep it up :)

Aw this is so cute...just a tad sad...haha i rhymed....ah...ya..n/eway...great poem...the flow was kinda cute...5/5

This is a really good poem. 5/5 Deffinately! Keep it up ill be waiting to read more!
Becky
xoxo

I really liked this one sometimes you broke the rhyme scheme and its not as good as your newer stuff but i still loved i think you have so much talent and i love that you have had love great job

Nice poem girl i know how oyu feel. and i hopr it get'd better for you 5.5

I love all of your poems, sooooo gooooood! "Thats why i still love you"! LOL, nice poem, very well done!

Gosh i am so jealous. i wish i cood b half as good as u...i dun no wat u wanna b wen u get older..but i bet ull get a poem published no matter wat u do..u r so good. wow.!
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Beautiful
touching
deep
intense
are the few words i'd chose to comment on ur poem
5/5
love amy

Omg i love this poem so much and i can so relate to it is beatiful keep doing your thing is amazing