The Light Of My Life

by Hopeless Romantic   Aug 4, 2005


In the darkness,
I found your light.
When all was hopeless,
your beauty shown bright.

When I thought that I
could love no more.
You touched my heart,
to the very core.

You made me smile,
when I could only frown.
You picked me up
when I was down.

When all was lost
you gave me life.
You brought me joy
instead of strife.

Now i think of you
every day and night.
you came into my life
and made everything right.

i smile when we're together
and when we are apart.
the presence of your beauty
stops my very heart.

i hope as time goes on
you will see how i feel.
and i hope that you will see
that these feelings are for real.

I love you truly,
I love you wholly.
I love you completely,
I love you solely.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    That was a very sweet poem. You're a wonderful writer! 5/5
    God Bless

    ~*Tay*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, this was a very romantic poem. The rhymes and flow were great. It really had a nice poetic essence to it.

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I loved that! When I read it at first I thought the last stanza ruined it because it was so different from the others, but from re-reading it I've changed my mind. It just finished it off nicely; the cherry on the ice-cream.

    Lovely.

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Personally I've always felt that love is very cliche, there's just too much of it. But I realized that that is a beautiful things, and that no matter how many couples there are, it is always a beautiful thing when they swear love to each other.

    //Truest Lies//

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    aww i think this one is my favorite so far..lol...nice job...5/5 keep it up...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

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