aww i think this one is my favorite so far..lol...nice job...5/5 keep it up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Personally I've always felt that love is very cliche, there's just too much of it. But I realized that that is a beautiful things, and that no matter how many couples there are, it is always a beautiful thing when they swear love to each other.

//Truest Lies//

I loved that! When I read it at first I thought the last stanza ruined it because it was so different from the others, but from re-reading it I've changed my mind. It just finished it off nicely; the cherry on the ice-cream.

Lovely.

Wow, this was a very romantic poem. The rhymes and flow were great. It really had a nice poetic essence to it.

That was a very sweet poem. You're a wonderful writer! 5/5
God Bless

~*Tay*~