Crawling in the Dark

by Clarissa   Aug 4, 2005


--- I don't know where i was going with this, but please comment & rate i will return the favor---

I am weak…
There is not much this heart can take
One more broken move
Will prove every single mistake

Fake smiles, Fake loves…
I’m trying not to fall apart
I want everything to go away
So I am not left with a broken heart

Now here I am alone
Left crawling in the dark
Wounds engraved in my mind
Each person leaving a vast mark

Crawling and Crawling
Right beneath my skin
Sorry I wasn’t good enough
Loving you was such a sin

The lights are getting darker
The sun isn’t shinning bright
If you ask me if I’m ok
I’ll tell you I won’t be all right

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Very nicely done.. the title reminded me of a Hoobastank song. I could tell you were a little confused in writing this poem. It did jump from place to place.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Dohr

    Very meaningful poem. I liked that you kept with the same ryhme scheme throughout the poem. Well thought out and written!

  • 19 years ago

    by KrypticKristen

    Definetly another 5/5 omg i love all of ur poems lol there amazing! keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    i can see where you're going its very VERY well written, it also reminds me of hoobastanks song, newayz great write, definately worth the read, 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by crystal

    i really liked this one. it flowed really well. keep it up!
    crystal