by Clarissa Aug 4, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
--- I don't know where i was going with this, but please comment & rate i will return the favor--- |
by Darien
Very nicely done.. the title reminded me of a Hoobastank song. I could tell you were a little confused in writing this poem. It did jump from place to place. |
by Sean Dohr
Very meaningful poem. I liked that you kept with the same ryhme scheme throughout the poem. Well thought out and written! |
Definetly another 5/5 omg i love all of ur poems lol there amazing! keep up the good work |
i can see where you're going its very VERY well written, it also reminds me of hoobastanks song, newayz great write, definately worth the read, 5/5 |
by crystal
i really liked this one. it flowed really well. keep it up! |