im sorry you're having a hard time, i hope things work out for you. great poem...

Wow what a beautiful poem
I no how u feel but things will get better soon.
An excellent poem. Well done
~*NiGhTs ChIlD*~

I love it.. you're a really great poet with lots of talent... I've enjoyed reading your poems. Very sad yet effective poem, well done on it. I'm sorry you're having a hard time... look up. Full points.

Thanks for the comment too. Yeah, finding out my girlfriend cut kind of sucked... urgh.

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Such a beautiful poem !

xxx

I noticed a lot of punctuation and capitolization corrections that were needed. Overall it was a very good poem, but if you just correct those errors makes your poem flow, and more understandable. Not to put you down it was a very good poem. Those things are just what would improve it. Still a 5/5!

God Bless,
Taylor